Tuesday, May 09, 2006

The Journey...

Heya fellaz...it seemz like suddenly everyone has disappeared frm da bloggin world...like hawww...newaz...so i m tryin to b inspiring in diz one fer da 1st time...lolz...i hope i don't freak u guyz out...thought bout it in da shower...well arnd few days back wen me sarah n dayaan had gone to exit...hmm...rote it dat day,postin it today...:P

She takes a deep breath and closes her eyes,
thinks absolutely clear and feels all wise.
slowly sinks into a journey of her dreamland,
all alone with no person and no helping hand.

She finds herself in front of a huge mountain,
the hot fierce wind and blaring sun on the lane.
she shudders with fear,she squints her eyes,
she suffers a feeling which is so not nice.
the mount ain't a relieving attribute as well,
the climb,the journey,the destination-a complete hell?

She starts with a slow and uncertain stride,
so starts the pursuit for success with her ride.
the path is ok but laid with little pebbles,
she is sweating but gets her feet to settle.
she advances while the pebbles now grow into stones,
her thoughts,her ways,her walk need to accord to the tone!

She learns and matures as the journey advances,
but now the rain pours and the cold wind dances.
she shivers and feels like a frozen block of ice,
again suffers a feeling which is so not nice.

Now she meets a bunch of other human mates,
frail,lifeless,overpowered by their fate.
gurl your wasting time!you will get nowhere!
the fate is supreme and it'll b hard to bear.
No,no,no...i will keep trying no matter how late,
i will not be the one to get thrashed by the fate.

She moves on but now with a question of doubt,
for now she sees gigantic boulders all about.
the rain n wind now accompanied with cruel lightening,
she bears a feel which is confusing and frightening.

Should she turn and go back?
the confidence had started to lack.
Should she forfeit before the absolute fate?
the dreams,desires,destiny would all agitate.

She takes a deep breath and closes her eyes again,
her slow,silent,sheer prayer then began.
"you cannot be so callous towards me,
my unfinished journey remains to b,
GOD, i totally trust in you,
trust in myself wich makes me do,
give me strenght so i can face,
so my journey turns out ace."

Bit by bit she opened her eyes,
finally had a feeling wich felt all nice.
the demonic weather had actually perished,
spring was now the weather which she cherished.
she had a smile and had reached her top,
assured that worthy efforts would never flop.

She came back in reality and luved the dreamland,
the same should be the efforts in the real land.
she smiles as the dreamland turned out fine,
all it is that i waz speaking she all this time.

P.S - i no its long...:P n den i m hopefully goin to sana's place tomm...gonna cook together and hav omg lotsa funn....

P.S agn - i dunno how i fergot to mention dat diz is my 50th post...so yayzzz....reached it pretty fast but den yayzz...lolz....

I m out fer now....muah...

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

meenu!! cool babe! the visualization...dat is d ability to b able to "see" what ur talkin bout is amazing...the pebbles...rocks...sweet stuff...n d message was good too!! very good attempt...see...u shud rite more!! also im first to comment...YAAY...lolz...hope u have fun at sana's n gald u not goin to india...tc...mwahz!

Cuckud said...

thnx gail...ya sana's waz awesumm...da next post bout it...oh i completely fergot to mention diz waz my 50th post...:D *dances* well...how can i not mention dat..omgg goin back now to edit it....cheers...read da last line agn...haha...thnx newaz...i m happy fer once i aint blah n whinin wile ritin...i m in a new "nahaaa...i don't careee" phase..so yea.

sun said...

yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....................................gud gud i already rote a mail 2 u n am riting sumthing agn........it ves awesome keep it up........

Sarah said...

Meenal...i'm so touched!
I'm absolutely touched by wht u wrote!
It was so spirutal and emotionally overwhelming!!!
Omg!!
And i'm so sry fer reading it so late!!!
11th may 2006, thursday

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