I fail to see the truth
blinded by the phony prospect
I fail to hear the peaceful silence
deafened by the mimicked voices
I fail to take the invisible hand
fooled by the plastic limb
I fail to speak the line
gagged with confused speech
I fail to understand the meaning
my self dictionary stabbed me
Seems i have forgotten to smile,
though i flash my teeth.
Seems i have forgotten to breath,
though my nose inhales the air.
Seems i have forgotten to express,
though i puke words constantly.
Seems i have forgotten to take,
each day as it comes.
Seems i have tried to hard,
but for the wrong cause.
Its all in the mind...Thoughts...
And as i THINK and Think and think...
I fail...or am i failing???
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oh my godddd... dis is a Masterpiece i say!!!.. Butttt i don't like u being so upset,depressed n BLAH... but now i'm glad u're feeling muj better and relaxeddd.. i luv u n think about my offer.. i was serious about uu.. hehe.. mwahhhh!
good stuff...i can see quite a bit of creativity pouring thru...ur really improving meen...mwah
jo ur offer waz da most cutest thing ever...i m up fer it netime,neday....mwahhhhhhhzzzzz....:D lowwie uuuuu....*dances*
gailll appreciate it....thnxxx...muahhhhzz...i still ahv to pay u 60 bux...omgg...n sumhow icant seem to comment on ur space...ssup wid ittt? like i ahv tried more dan 10 times now...i dunno...mebbe sumthin rong wid my pc...but seems to b only wen i need to comment on ur space...:S
Hey Meenal, you're not the only one with that problem hun..
Btw the poem was extraordinary..
Awesome stuff tusshi!!
U've improved like HELL lot woman! Guess it's mass comm :P..
lol no seriously..awesome!!
omg!! what!! 2 of my fav ppl in d whole world gettin togther n doin sumtin..sumtin naughty i bet:P..n i'mnot included??!!!:O
No one offered me nethin..i'm depressed :(
jannn dun b jealous noww...cumon...i lowwie u no!!! *angel* :) but i still wont tell u whts me n jo upto:P n jooo U ALSO DUN TELL HER:D n u idiot dat poem is not outcum of stupid mass comm but utter frustration n blahness...nvm...lolz....take care n mail me soon u whoreee....muahhhzz..
sarahhhhh woman....thnxxxx...luv u muah...i felt so light after acribblin diz down...like really...:| newaz laterz fellas.
so mean tushhi!! I'm depressed :<.
But i'm sure my jo babie'll tell me..shez my sweetheart..not like YOU...whori!! :P
muahhhahahaha
dn be so dpressd.. we all live id prblems
yaaaaaayyyyyy...... meenu interested in my offerrrrr.. *dances*.. jannn i cant tell it.. *secret*... after things are DONE between us we'll surprise you.. haha..
lolz jo ur so cute...muahhh...but its ok i had rehem on jan n rote bout it on sana's blog...so jan reead it der...n jo as it is u no bout my acceptance n we both r dancin bout it now..so its all kewl...heheheh....der jan i do hav ppl takin my side still...happiness is overflowinn...lolzzz....shooo now...hahah...lowwie u so much...n miss u totally more dan dat...muahhh
GIRL...u need toooooo letttttttt goo..and evythn wil work out just fine..have faith in u..ands eriously wy doesnt anyone write bout happy thins..heyloo.theres always me whou can talk bout..lol..not really sinceu dunt likeme muchanymore:P..lol..lets talk about happy things and happy people..but OMGG FOR THEPOEM..it makes me think..nota good thign really..and yes i can think..so shutup!!
Nauseen, YOU should seriously start a blog. It would be so awesome to read what you'd write about. I know we all get ober-excited when you comment!!
lol...
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