Ok dun take diz as sumthin i feel coz i m not able to decide my coll...lolz dat is not coz of dat...jus ponderin over all da chng i m gonna go thru after bein outta skooll...so jus felt like ritin...hav funn...
There was a time when all was calm,
a time when happiness was all around...
There was a time when all the paths were laid,
the paths where even the plain walks paid...
There was a time when goals were explicit,
goals by which the flare of triumph was lit...
There was a time which was pure beyond terms,
the purity which gave a feel devoid of germs...
I can't believe the 'brutality of time'..!!
I CAN'T BELIEVE THE "BRUTALITY OF TIME"..!!
Now is a time where everything is hurly-burly,
a time where happiness deviates itself surely...
Now is a time where all the paths are hideous, the paths where effortless moves become tedious...
Now is a time where aspirations are only a hope,
aspirations which are dangling by a feeble rope...
Now is a time which is flawed beyond words,
the flawness which completely feels absurd...
I can't believe the 'brutality of time'..!!
I CAN'T BELIEVE THE "BRUTALITY OF TIME"..!!
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what's up wid u? i don really get y u wrote it or what's so brutal bout ur changed life :S. Anyway, relax n reduce writin..it's freaky ! :P
muahhh
OK..so i dunt noe u anymore..coz thts just like woh..LIKE WOHO..MEENALLLLLLLLL..u wrote tht..like OMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGG!!CAN u not be so blah..i noe ive moved to bumblefuckhland..but ull survive..lol..just kiddin...made u smile didnt it??
muaaaaaaaaah
wow...nahh i kinda liked it...especially "Now is a time where all the paths are hideous, the paths where effortless moves become tedious..."...dats soo true..lol..well nyway keep up d good riting n dont worry hun...sure the future seems scary but we'll all pull thru n do great...especially u..so keep smiling n keep walking...mwahzz
lolz jan even i dunno y i rote it...jus rote it...:P well i felt like doin sumthin creative..like seriously wen i luk at all da chnges i will face its like freaky..
naus omg 'we r so meant to b'.....lolz u no me inside out lolz...but gurl i aint blah jus tensed...:P:P yaya kya bakwaas kar rahi hoon...i luvv u soo muj,,muah..i m still smilin....:D
gailuuu u r so sweet...thnxx.. n even i hope i will i no i will but gud enuff i still hope... hehe... now i feel so muj better yayzz..i spilt my mind out...
Damn girl..ur maturing!!!!
Ur writting has really gone uphill..i'm so proud of u..honestly!!!
awesome stuff..
Hey dun worry bout the colleges..all kewl..we'll figure something out..k hun?
luv u...mwwaaahhhzz...
lolz thnx sarah...maturinn...??? haha i m 18 already....ok now i duno wat dat waz suppsoed to mean..but den my colls down to three...uowd,lse,or india...gailuuu its k u dun need to find out bout mahe..i aint goin der...thnxx newayzz..
omg didn't i comment?? im so sowiee 4 commentin so pretty late... bout da poem... m all blank.. is tht u??.. whoa tht was like just soo amazing i swear.... i mean really it was way too kewl.. keep it up meenu... dun b blah... ur my cute chick yea..?? i luv u n u knoe tht.. mwah mwah..
yaay....glad ur feeling better...ur gonna have a blast man...no tension of pulling up ur socks n gettin d third degree for glancing at a guy...r u kiddin...u shud b crying in relief...hehe...mwah babes...just kno all u pple r gonna do brill...my juniors after all...hehe
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