Saturday, May 20, 2006

Chutzpah...

She waited for what seemed like eternity,
all she found were tears and failures,
all the consoling seemed to be false pity.

Whenever she passed sumone a smile,
a painful backstab she got meanwhile.

whatever she wanted to have in life mainly,
deceitful snatch,untimely fate was superior insanely.

wherever she felt the need of a helping hand,
there existed selfish people on sophisticated land.

She waited for what seemed like eternity,
all she found were tears and failures,
all the consoling seemed to be false pity.

She thought there waz a feeble hope,
but that didnt seem to have any scope.

She called for one final moment,
but alas!her intellect them bcame dormant.

Dead mind but yet the thoughts were inevitable?
she waz fearful with a body so unstable.

Nomore words and she jumped off the balcony,
all subjugated and thrashed by the irony.

No sound,no feel except a pulsating heart,
she moaned and smiled to the sin on her part.

Finally her body striked the cold stiff ground,
an instant pain shot up in and all around.

But total black-out after the nippy distress,
a sign of relief on desertion from further stress.

But what????wait....

her lifeless soul was dangling nowhere,
neither the dreadful hell nor the heaven air.

Her intricacies she thought would be tamed,
but her sin of self-kill was to be blamed.

Now her complications were all bid bye-byes,
but yet the PEACE wasn't found likewise.

She waited for what seemed like eternity,
all she found were tears and failures,
all the consoling seemed to be false pity.

well for her it just couldnt be right,
and she was vanquished even after the dying fight.

YA RITE!!! WAIT A MINUTE...!!!

She woke up and was glad to realise that she was dreaming,
but damn!! she got laryngitis from all that screaming...!!!

6 comments:

Sarah said...

WOW! Hun...i must say...Work of art..
Itz so amazing how u recreated tht moment!
Wht does ur title mean? wht does it symbolise?!
I think ur writting improves by the second! Coz this was jus awesome girl!
It mite not mean much, but i really appreciate ur ability to always come out on top..
dun ask how i got so senti...i guess itz the result fever
mwaahhzz

Cuckud said...

lolzz...thnx hun...well chutzpah means da nerve to do sumthin rather the daring...n i guess its obvious wat it symbolises her nerve to jump off da balcony..well like we hav discussed it b4 even though suicidal ppl r like called cowards but en it takes a lot more nerve to put an end to one's own life...well ders a little secret behind diz poem of mine...but den its only fer me...lolz...dun worry bout resultz gurl...hopefully we all will do jus fineee...:)*fingers crossed* muahhh...

Anonymous said...

lol...meenal!! i loved the idea babe...it was really good...especially how u rote about what happenned even after she jumped off the balcony...rock on gurl..lol...the only thing was u made the ending light...still cool! :)...tc...mwah

Cuckud said...

well gail da endin bit is made up..originally i only thot of keepin it till her not able to find peace even after dyin..but den u no ppl tend to freak out wen i rite or do or think stuff like dese...lolz not literally do aah u no wat i mean...so i simmered it down a lil so dat ppl wudnt think i m a complete pschic...thnxx dude...

sun said...

wow meenal....well im sorry itna late likh rahi hoon but try n underwtand n i no u vill understand....hmmph....dats a very very nice poem dere but if ur da gal in this poem den im very dissappoiinted in u odervise dis poem surely rockzzzzzzzz..........

Cuckud said...

sana i told u fer me its like "naha..i dunt careee...." so dun worry i wont jump off...u no i luv maself...n i m soo ful of muself...like all u ppl keep sayin right...u think i m dumb..haha no worries sweety i wont ...lolz it waz jus wen my imagination ran wild wile i waz shittin in da toilet....quitee sum time backkk...so i jus put it down...lowwie u muahhhh...