One fine evenin when i waz sippin tea,
a petite prospect is wat i managed to see.
my lovely diminutive duo of love birds,
but to portray them,i hav no words.
They are beautiful but yet so delicate,
thus it is poignant to whine about their fate.
their innocence which is so untainted,
a slow sin managed to get my hands painted.
they can make the shrillest of noises,
yet i fail to construe their voices.
they seem to b communicatin sumthin,
yet i cannot comprehend even onethin.
I m uncertain bcoz people say,"i assume both r female". :p
yet their moments of zeal never seem to look pale. *thinks*
their stable dwellin - a tiny little confine,
yet they are content n never seem to whine.
a confine in which not even one of my foot wud fit,
yet they manage to endure so well,oh shit!!
Eyein them i can only have an emotion of lament,
about the prisoner like shackles that i hav lent,
but their liberty is what i cannot restore,
bcoz da external world is entirely hardcore.
An offense so small,yet undoin it is like 'NOWAY',
it makes me profoundly grieve over...
THE 'FREEDOM' I TOOK AWAY...:(
P.S - i m unsure bout the 4th line in second para..does it make sense..?
laterz,muah...
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Cuckud.. beautifull words luv... and u no wht.. and it makes sense.. duno where u think up this stuff.. but as i was telling Sana the other day.. Janani Sana and u have an amazing talent of writing.. dun eva stop.. itz one of ur gifts..
Luv u.. mwwaahhh
ps: i answered ur blog first!! yea!!
haha...stop writin poems man..it's freaky!!:P i din get wat u meant by dat 4th line either:S did it make sense??:S
well..anyway i like d way u've ended it..LMAO...noway??haha
my tusshie babie:D
P.S: thanks sarah..u made my day!!
lurrvvvvvvvvveeeee uuuuu!!:D
n yea..sarah man..u r MEAN!! u din visit my blog till now:(..it's been alive for more than a month now:'(
go..shooo:@
hey sarah..thnx fer da encouragement..duno wat i wud do widout my frds..lolz.. n yet luk at da irony bcoz dese same frds(da others) end up pissin da shit outta me...hah!!!
jan dude in 4th line i meant to say dat a sin slowly painted my hands.. coz i hav realised diz feelin only after so long.so yea..
luv ya guys..muah...
"a slow sin managed to get my hands painted"
I think it could mean how doing something thats considered bad, yet extremely minor,
could still become something very serious.
For example,
Surgery : a surgeon makes a slight mistake during an open surgery, even though its a small miscalculation,you still end up with blood (or in this case "paint") on your hands.
"a slow sin managed to get my hands painted"
as in like initially when me n my lil bro planned to buy dese,..dat time nudin of dese kinda thots came up n we were all "weee" gettin a pair of luv birds,but like now slowly da realisation kinda hits me..:(
ohh...i get it now...u have pet birds...wow babe...u r like freakin me out wid all dis hard core stuff..awesum...its complex but still shows ur true feelings..beautiful...told u , u were gud... :)
hehe inspiration frm my 'X' house captain n sports captain...n dude if i m gud den god noes wat wud ppl hav to say fer yaa..:)muahh.....
lolz.. Bet u didn't expect such a huge response frm ppl bout ur stuff.. which so happens to b gud..
Dude.. so many ppl predicting wht the fouth line means.. lolz.. rite another poem bout it..lmao jus kidding.. gud on u girl..
Catch u l8r..
all the best fer PE Cuckud
thanks....BUT...i wasnt d sports cap...u forgot?? sheesh it was ash!! how can u confuse me wid her?? MEEN!! k babe...loves u...tc
oh FUCK *turns "BRITE RED"* :(:(:(
gaill i m so soowwieeee fder da confusion.......hawwwwww.....fuck so soryy...but u still were my x house captain n der dat proves how mind fucked boards has made me..but deni still lowwwwiiee uuu...muah muah...:D
p.s really sorry...*still red*:$
n sarah dudeee thnx so muj fer da luck i need it though its p.e..havin many flutterin butterflies,sorry i didnt wish ya fer maths..i hope it waz "G" enuf..fuck i feel like such a whore agnst every1...like literally i m 4gettin everythin..gawd!!!n now i hav doubts bout ritin also(already 2 topicz in head:P)coz i freakd out jan,gail n den evn nauseen on fone today..teehee...thoguh its in a gud way..i feel so lucky wid u guys arnd..*dances n goes completely psyched*:D
P.S - GAIL DEAREST I M REALLY SORRY...:(
Hey hun.. math was ok.. dun worry bout not wishin me.. u already did tt in advance fer business exam.. lolz.. wen we spoke on the bus.. lolz.. itz all kewl..
And ur probably really mind fuked rite now as boards r goin on.. bet everyone's understanding bout stuff like tht.. so chill..
i'll c u wen i c u..lolz..
lowwee u.. mwwwaahhh...
haan haan...u shud be...:(...but its ohk...ur forgiven... :)...u tc...love u too...mwah..
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