solitude is wat i yearn for,
y is everythin so crowded??
a chnge is wat i seek for,
y is everythin so void n frail??
concentration is wat i need to improve on,
y i m so distracted??
fear is sumthin i wana conquer,
y does it feel so diffcult??
happiness is wat i crave fer,
y does it seem to b impossible??
life is sumthin dat i wana face,
y do i wish to run away??
confusion is all dat surrounds me...
y am i confused??
der is fear deep down sumwer...
y do i hav dat fear,fer wat??
it feels as if everythin's gonna doom...
y its yet another simple day rite?
everythin seems so unimportant...
y cant i feel an urge of xcitement fer nethin?
it seems to b yet another phase...
a phase wich turns everythin in a haze...
a phase wich has landed me in complete delusion...
a phase wich is causin complete confusion...
a phase wich makes me seek only solitude...
a phase wich makes me seek only "SOLITUDE"...
C u C k U d . . . DOMAIN...!!! I write whatever triggers the head. Mostly personal and quite colloquial.
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Poem????
Cmon even these words r not suitable for such an awesome piece of work. Rly cuckud, its rly touchy and just PERFECT. Trust me all i can say is its too damnn BEAUTIFUL. Im juss outa words but hope u get wt im tryin to say. Its juss spur-of-the-moment nd so natural. Lots of huggies n kisses for yeah after readin this..
LOVE..Shoaib.!!!
thnxx a lot shoaib...but i wud jus call diz a state of mind of mine...i aint not sum1 to rite like diz on a usual basis...but jus tryin not to feel like a total waste wid a lame life...*wonders*
Cuckud.. i knw wht ur feelin hun.. i understand... i wont mention in this comment..i'll call u and we can talk.. but honestly the words are beautifull..i really hope everyhting works out fer u.. honestly.. I LOVE U..tc.. c u soon
mwwaahhh
:0... wha??.... why??.... who??.......When??....HOW???
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i..i...i...I DONT GET IT!!
wow...meen...i never knew u cud rite so well...its really beautiful...simple yet it manages to send the message across so well and touch the heart...n if u dont usually rite den i think u shud...u have talent gurl!! mwah...
welll.. nothing more to say other than this meenal ..." Look into the mirror and all u see is not JUST ur reflection... u see everything behind you as well" i hope u understand that...
sarah i luv ya 2,thnxxx alot fer bein der..mwah..
jan - u suck ...but i still luv u..;)
gaill - THNX a lot fer da encouragement frm da ritin "G" herself...really appreciate dat..muahh...
james - i do no i can see da background too...but sumthin dat wud soothe n not cause pain or make me cry b it nethin bout da background(luks,colors,size)..i dunno how to put in xact words but i think u mite get my point...
Great words.
You can really see that they're coming from the heart, completely unfiltered.
Thats what separates true pieces from the e-crap you see nowadays that comes out beautifully at first, but then has to be put into a format that society can accept.
Cheers hun :)
aww...ur welcome hun...how r d exams going?? miss u guys...surprisingly..hehe..mwah...cya
hmm its quite weird but yet so kewl dat a person can make so muj sense wen he/she has to...n tries sum way to get rid of da negative influences..*meenal feels gud*:D
hey gail xamz r so far so gud n i m really happy bout tat...heyyy miss ya too man..skool's turnin into a freakin dumpyard wid all same ppl leavin...*whines*
P.S i had intended to rite "Sane ppl leavin"
tada..
lol...yea i was wondering bout dat...hehe..glad 2 hear...do gud in all ur oder exams too...n thanks for checkin my space...mwah..
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